Mar. 1st, 2009

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02/27/2009 - Friday, no work - I assume. I woke up too late to call in.
Deleted from Chapter 9
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Old chapter wordcount: 2,643
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Vicesteed Draft 1 wordcount: 207,877
Vicesteed Draft 2 current wordcount: 190,766
Which scene is it anyway?
Quincy stared into his reflection in the mirror above the sink. He had cleaned off the worst of the filth he'd acquired in the ragman's lair. His trousers would never recover, he feared. He glanced at the stains and his mind automatically tallied the cost for a new pair of trousers. He sighed and returned his gaze to the mirror. His face was gray, and it was not merely from the faint shadowed remnants of grime. He was tired.

He was bone-weary, tired of giving promises he didn't know if he could keep, and tired of distrusting every word he was told. He ran damp fingers through his hair. The light from the gaslamp caught every gray strand. The ring on his finger weighed heavily.

Throwing back his shoulders, he straightened and assessed himself coldly in the mirror. No, he thought. He rounded his shoulders slightly and allowed some of his weariness to show. He softened his gaze. That was better. He had been forced to leave his harmless manner when interviewing the ragman, but from what he understood, the homechulus housekeeper had a better grasp of societal niceties. It might respond better to the same manner he was used to using when trying to interview witnesses or suspects.

Not that a homechulus could really be a suspect in this-- He paused. Or could it? Finally, he shook his head and then crossed the carpet and opened the door to the powder room. The faintly perfumed air of the powder room ran tiny fingers along his neck.

Reason for deleting: It's an unnecessary transition scene. Too overtly "telling" the character. It was at the beginning of the chapter, which really slowed everything down. And last but not least, due to the restructuring of Quincy's earlier chapters, it wouldn't have happened there.
Notes: I've kept up a good pace on the revisions for the last few days, but I'm starting to feel burnt out. The itch to do actual writing is starting to get pretty bad. Editing does not satisfy it.
Other writingy stuff:
* Posted writing log
* [livejournal.com profile] penthius freewriting warmup about magic mirror profiles.
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Serving Tea 1 of 3, originally uploaded by aswiebe.

From [livejournal.com profile] sinister_dr_x and [livejournal.com profile] fayde's tea party, at which a lovely time was had by all. Except now I'm craving more cucumber sandwiches.

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  • 14:23 Put hair up in 2 twists again today. Becoming fond of this. Am also excessively cute! Makes me want to do cartwheels of victorious cuteness.
  • 17:16 Phil, curling up on the couch: "Where is my plague blanket? Oh, there it is."
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One of the few girly, self-indulgent, make-me-feel-better things I do is painting my nails. I haven't done this for quite a long time--months. I thought maybe it was just because I hadn't taken the time, and that was part of it. So, while watching the Jesse Stone mystery tonight, I got out the nail polish and started to paint my nails.

Shortly thereafter, I remembered the main reason that I haven't painted my nails in a while. It's cold. I have poor circulation to my hands and feet, and it's cold, and painting nails means having hands and feet exposed to the air, without socks or blankets or warm things, for at least 40 minutes.

It will probably be at least another month before I do this again. Now that I think of it, painting nails is really more of a summer activity.

But! Now my nails are shimmery orangey-pink, and they make me smile.
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Yes, there are about a billion recipes out there for adulterated mac & cheese. This one's actually pretty good. It makes a reasonable facsimile of homemade macaroni & cheese, and it's incredibly easy.

Ingredients:
2 boxes mac & cheese (I used the 3-cheese variety)
1 c. grated cheddar cheese
1/2 c. yogurt
3/4 tsp. cayenne
12 saltines (or 6 Ritz crackers, or seasoned bread crumbs)
1 Tbsp. butter, melted

Pre-heat oven to 375. Follow package instructions for mac & cheese.

Grease 1-1/2 qt baking dish. Combine broken-up crackers, melted butter, and grated cheese.

To mac & cheese, add 1/2 c. cheddar, yogurt, and cayenne. Pour into baking dish. Top with cracker mixture. Bake 20 minutes. Let stand 5 minutes before eating.

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