abracanabra: (editing despair)
How to do the stuff that needs to get done--I don't know.

* "Alien/Whore/Mother" needs to get revised, polished, and submitted to The Ladies of Trade Town anthology by June 9th.

* "Leaving Remediation Town" needs to get written, let sit, critiqued, revised, and submitted to Science in My Fiction by June 30th.

* I have a self-constructed goal of finishing bulk revisions (four. more. chapters.) and writing basic synopses and pitches for Vicesteed before 4th Street, which is June 25th. This is self-imposed, and I don't really "lose" anything if I don't make it--except the ability to speak coherently and persuasively about a ready-to-publish novel. Erk.

* Do the social media presentation for my writing group next month, June the ??th.

That's just the writing stuff. I also have a ridiculous stack of paperwork, and emails, and to-do lists, and cleaning and gardening and cooking food and photography stuff, and, and, and--all the usual stuff that nearly drives me to a nervous breakdown when I think about it.

I don't know how I'll get it all done. Especially since the precious few hours a day (on the 50% of days when I'm actually working only the 50% I'm supposed to) I have for writing-related stuff should all be going to editing Vicesteed, not the other three goals, let alone all the misc. non-writing crap I reallyshouldbedoing.

The rolling a D6 to figure out what I should do next, while it would get a lot done and keep me from burning out on one thing, might not get things done fast enough.

If I do a deathmarch, too much other stuff would slip, and I would totally burn out.

Deathmarch to timed productivity goals, I guess, and then do standard chores and D6 to-dos after that. Although even deathmarching, I'd still need to do dishes/dinner/laundry, and that's an hour or so a day right there. If it works, though, this might be a good balance of getting stuff done....

Goals )
abracanabra: (editing despair)
05/21/10, Friday, worked full-time
* Read WritersMarket newsletter.
* Wrote 1 1/2 pgs. on "Leaving Remediation Town," the next longhand project.

05/20/10, Thursday, worked full-time
* Read 2 FundsforWriters and WritersDigest newsletters.
* The Importance of Specificity: http://blog.writersdigest.com/mfaconfidential/The+Importance+Of+Specific+Details.aspx

05/18/10, Tuesday, worked full time
* Read WritersWeekly newsletter.

05/17/10, Monday, worked full time
* Wrote Aswiebe's Market List newsletter, posted around.
* Worked on making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 30.

05/16/10, Sunday
Did stuff? What stuff, I do not remember. But there was definitely stuff done. Hmm. I know I attended Coyote Con again--beyond that it's a blur.

05/15/10, Saturday, worked on day job stuff
* The power of nicknames: http://www.plottopunctuation.com/blog/show/78
* Updated market list from Duotrope and cleared out old contest listings.
* Attended Coyote Con stuff.

05/13/10, Thursday
* Posted writing logs.
* Made lawyer-suggested edits to copyright piece.
* Processed Strange Horizons' form rejection of "The Haunts of Hill Crossing." Finally. Apparently I got that email in April and just filed it in my "do something with this" folder and never actually processed it until now. Oops. Go go gadget rolling my to-do list!
* Submitted the first 197 words of Vicesteed to the Dear Lucky Agent contest.
* Worked on making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 30.

Synopses

May. 22nd, 2010 06:07 pm
abracanabra: (editing despair)
I have to write the synopses for Vicesteed now, and it's terrifying me. I mean, I can get it down to three paragraphs, but anything less than that feels impossible. And I'll definitely need a one-paragraph version and (ack!) a one-sentence pitch.

This is my best attempt at a sentence pitch (logline), and it's clunky, and doesn't address everything:
Vicesteed is a steampunk locked-room murder mystery set in a
far future where a woman whose only memories are of the vices of
others must fight through an unfamiliar neo-Victorian world to find
out who she was, who took away her memories, and what she really did
in her role as a vicesteed.


And for the paragraph, I've got this, but again, leaves maybe too much out, and the last sentence I fear is cliche:
In a Victorian steampunk future, QUINCY is a private investigator ordered to find the cause of the comatose Prince Consort's affliction. Two very different women are the key to solving this locked-room mystery: VALINDA, a former vicesteed searching for her identity--and her revenge--after escaping a theme park of depravity where her experiences were broadcast to a discerning audience; and ROSEMARY, a gently bred young lady with dangerous ties to a rebel underground and an unfeminine inclination to build clockwork automata. They unravel the conspiracy, but not before they find passion, betrayal, unwanted truth, and murder.

My problem:
How do you condense it all down to a pitch when you've got three separate plotlines equally balanced with three main characters, all of which interrelate but are more than just different views of the same thing? Just pitch the opening plotline and allude to the others? I can figure out how to get it down to three paragraphs, but a one-paragraph or heaven forbid one sentence pitch is beyond me. If I focus on the thing that they start out with in common, it requires way too much explanation of how they fit together. How did you do it? Any good resources to read for key things to include or exclude or look for?

CoyoteCon general summary advice )
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
05/12/10, Wednesday
* Finished Critters critique and began MinnSpec one.
* Prepped Vicesteed ch. 31 for edits.
* Began making editing changes on Vicesteed ch. 30.
* Took down "Salvaging Scottwell" from Bookrix. I have learned a very valuable lesson, and that lesson is that I really don't have time to do a popularity-based writing contest properly. I just don't, and I shouldn't try.
* Worked on brainstorming "Remediation Town," the desertification-and-algal-bloom story. Not done yet. Need good reasons a bandit chief *wouldn't* want a town to prey on.
* Read Critters newsletter.

05/11/10, Tuesday, worked full-time and then had bridge night. But had a goodly amount of downtime at work.
* Finished redmarking Vicesteed ch. 30.
* Finished writing this Platinadar letter and typed it up. Just need to clean up my misc. notes and it's good to go.

05/10/10, Monday
* Processed Andromeda Inflight Magazine's form letter rejection of "Demons of Disease."
* Worked on redmarking Vicesteed ch. 30.

05/09/10, Sunday
* Attended CoyoteCon online panels.
* Read Duotrope, FFWSmallMarkets, and Ralan newsletters and updated markets from them.
* Told Critters about sale/pub of "The Radiator Burped" and "These Things Take Time."
* Revised the "to do once published/accepted" list.

05/087/10, Saturday
* Attended Coyote Con online panels.
* Read FundsforWriters and FFWSmallMarkets newsletters.
* Posted writing log, freewriting.
* Processed publishing contract for "The Radiator Burped" reprint in Northern Lights: A MinnSpec Anthology.
* Posted about publication of "A fob chain went under his vest, between ribs..." to Fb, LJ, Twitter,
abracanabra: (editing despair)
05/06/10, Thursday
* Posted freewriting, writing log.
* Redmarked 2 pgs of Vicesteed ch. 30.
* Began Critters critique.
* Processed postage expense.
* Processed income from sale of "These Things Take Time." (The check arrived! Yay!)
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
05/05/10, Wednesday
* Processed payment status update for "These Things Take Time."
* Processed receipt acknowledgment for "Demons of Disease."
* Posted writing log, freewriting.
* Worked on redmarking Vicesteed ch. 30.
* Did Critters critique.
* Drafted "Rolling a To-Do List."
abracanabra: (editing despair)
04/28/10, Wednesday
* Processed Flash Me's personal rejection of "Road of Dreams" with editorial feedback.
* Read WritersDigest, Critters, and WritersWeekly newsletters.

04/27/10, Tuesday
* Processed Lightspeed Magazine's form rejection of "Alien/Whore/Mother."
* Posted about "These Things Take Time" publication to penthius, updated profiles, website biblio, bio (and bio to point to biblio), twitter, linkedin.
* Processed Scheherazade's Facade "splendid story, but not quite" personal rejection of "Ekaterina and the Firebird."
* Processed "Triangulations: End of the Rainbow" personal rejection of "Periwinkle Eyes."
* Read Duotrope, 2 Writing-World, WritersDigest, FundsforWriters, 2 FFWSmallMarkets, and 2 WritersWeekly newsletters and updated market list from them.
* Making flawed characters appealing: http://scribechat.com/archives/1150

04/24/10, Saturday, surgery...recovery afterward.

04/22/10, Thursday
* Posted about "These Things Take Time" publication in LJ, fb.
* "These Things Take Time," where cloning meets marriage counseling. Free to read. Bottom of pg (Vol 2 Num 2):
http://www.scribblersandinkspillers.com/emeraldtales.html

04/20/10, Tuesday, spent large chunk of morning wrangling doctor stuff
* Finished making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 29.
* Posted freewriting, writing log.
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
04/11/10, Sunday. Had too much stuff to do to set priorities, so the D6 determined where I spent my time.
* Worked on BookRix PR for "Salvaging Scottwell."
* Worked on typing up "Alien/Whore/Mother."
* Worked on making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 29.
* Processed Realms of Fantasy's form letter rejection of "Warmth in the Cold Time."
* Read Critters, Ralan, Writer's Digest, and Duotrope's Digest newsletters and updated markets from them.

04/10/10, Saturday
* Reworked notes from Copyright speech at MinnSpec into a how-to writing article and emailed to lawyer for a double-check.
* Began typing up Alien/Whore/Mother.

04/09/10, Friday
* Posted for volunteers to crit "Alien/Whore/Mother"
* Posted writing log,
* Worked on BookRix PR
abracanabra: (editing despair)
04/08/10, Thursday
* Read WritersWeekly magazine.
* Posted writing log, freewriting
* Worked on Bookrix PR and making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 29.
* Wrote 1/2 pg. on Alien/Whore/Mother.
abracanabra: (editing despair)
I have been working a lot less half-time and a lot more full-time for the last couple of months, and I am *really* sick of it. I have stuff that needs to get done, damn it!

04/06/10, Tuesday - 04/07/10, Wednesday, full-time at the day job
* Got a few more pages of Alien/Whore/Mother written, but mostly had time for nothing. Also working the 6:30 AM shift messed me up.

04/05/10, Monday, full-time at day job.
* Posted freewriting, writing log
* Did contracty stuff for getting Wiscon panel notes published.
* Processed "A Phoenix By Any Other Name" being available for (electronic) reprints again.
* Processed submitting "Salvaging Scottwell" to BookRix competition.
* Processed TweettheMeat's rejection of "The Reaper came."
* Belatedly processed TweettheMeat's publication of "She loved her new husband's mansion" and payment for it.
* Processed Nanoism's (twitfic reprint!) acceptance of "The Key to His Heart"
* Added twitfic benefit contest for Haiti to market list: http://nanoism.net/meta/nanoism-contest-for-haiti/
* Began making edits on Vicesteed ch. 29.
abracanabra: (editing despair)
04/04/10, Sunday, skipped Easter stuff. Bad Abra.
* Made a gallant attempt at a short Vicesteed pitch. Needs work. And help. And possibly tranquilizers. (Me, at the idea of doing the summaries--not the story.)
* Updated markets list from Duotrope.
* Made "Salvaging Scottwell" contest submission public and joined a couple of groups. Sigh. Networking to commence now...a necessity that I feel rather inadequate at.
* Analyzing a Sherlock Holmes story on the craft level, worth a re-read: http://holmes.spontaneousderivation.com/series/retyping-the-speckled-band/
* How to Target Your Submissions to Agents: http://www.guidetoliteraryagents.com/blog/How+To+Target+Your+Submissions+To+Agents.aspx

04/03/10, Saturday--psanky craft afternoon
* Posted freewriting.

04/02/10, Friday
* Posted writing log.
* Wrote 1 pg. Alien/Whore/Mother
abracanabra: (Let Me Tell You a Story)
Ugh. HELP! I'm working on writing up synopses for Vicesteed, and elevator pitches, and all kinds of things. Anybody who's read any of Vicesteed and/or heard me blather about it probably has some kind of idea what it's about. I need to distill it down to a nutshell--like the cover copy you read on the back of books. Advice, suggestions, and what you think this book is about (even with extremely limited exposure) are all welcome.

This is what I've got for the 1-paragraph summary:

Vicesteed is a steampunk locked-room murder mystery that follows the struggles of three people bound up in the mystery of the Prince Consort's death: VALINDA, an ass-kicking 21st-century woman in an 19th-century world, in search of her own identity and on the run from those who want to wipe clean her memory; ROSEMARY, a young lady whose unfeminine desire to be an inventor has led her into bad company even as she tries to find her place in society; and QUINCY, a detective who's seen hard times but hasn't let hope for a better future die.

And that's leaving out a lot. Is it leaving out anything crucial or especially gripping? I mean, there's romance and explosions and androids and forbidden technology and--damn it. I'm so bad at this.

I still need to distill it down further into an elevator pitch, but I have no idea how to do that. Specificity is important. Avoiding cliches is important. Getting in the reasons why it would appeal to readers is important.

Mrglflop.
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
03/20/10
Deleted from Vicesteed, ch. 28

Old chapter wordcount: 12,162
New chapter wordcount: 9,874
Vicesteed Draft 1 wordcount: 207,877
Vicesteed Draft 2 current wordcount: 141,521
Notes: This was mostly Quincy doing detectivy stuff, so I could just cut large blocks.
Reason for deleting scene: It's overly dramatic restating of things that are shown and implied and do not need to be told.
Which deleted scene is it anyway?

"How kind." Quincy did not try to temper the weary irony in his voice as he answered. He merely restrained himself from adding, "At least I shall ride to my execution in style."

As soon as Quincy seated himself in the coach, the messenger climbed up to ride with the coachman. During the ride, Quincy prepared himself. Whether it was the Prime Minister or the Queen herself who had summoned him, he knew that it wasn't to give him a pat on the back. He had failed to find the persons responsible for the Prince's illness--death, he corrected himself. His investigation had little to show for itself save a collection of inexplicable events. Had he been quicker, he might have found the cause of the Prince's illness in time enough to cure it.

A sigh gusted from him. One more failure to add to the tally.

Other writingy stuff:
* Structuring your agent pitch: http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2010/03/pitching-to-agents-how-to-throw-fiction.html
* Writing specific queries: http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2010/03/secret-strength-of-killer-queries.html

03/19/10
* Began redmarking Vicesteed ch. 29 while hanging out at Common Roots cafe with [livejournal.com profile] mischief03. And also a little more during work downtime, of which there was little.
* Wrote 1 pg. longhand on Alien/Whore/Mother.

03/18/10
* Posted writing log, freewriting, NanoWri
* So far I have 62,907 words in Vicesteed's deleted scenes file. Wow. No kidding, I'm a taker-out when editing.
* Myth-busting--How recent pro authors broke in: http://jimhines.livejournal.com/496760.html and http://jimhines.livejournal.com/497092.html
* Began making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 28.
abracanabra: (editing despair)
03/13/10, Saturday
* Redmarked all of Vicesteed ch. 28. And it was an unusually large chapter, lacking in large chunks that could be cut, so that's saying something.

03/12/10, Friday
* Belatedly processed "Where Dinosaurs Roam" publication in Thaumatrope and payment info.
* Processed Emerald Tales' acceptance of "These Things Take Time" and replied with the info they need for a contract.

03/07/10, Monday
* Posted writing log, freewriting, nanowri
* Began redmarking Vicesteed ch. 28.
* Processed GUD's form letter rejection of "Good Help is Hard to Find."
abracanabra: (editing)
03/06/10, Sunday
* Read Ralan, WritersWeekly, Writing-World, Lunch Weekly, FFWSmallMarkets, FundsforWriters, Duotrope, and 2 WritersDigest newsletters and updated market list from them.
* An exercise for writing a query letter with voice: http://elanajohnson.blogspot.com/2010/02/writing-query-letter-with-voice.html
* The Starter Guide to Twitter: http://tribalwriter.com/2010/02/22/a-writers-starter-guide-to-twitter-or-everything-i-wish-someone-had-told-me-when-i-first-started-using-twitter/
* Approaches to making a living as a writer: http://chrisguillebeau.com/3x5/files/2010/02/Guillebeau_WD.pdf
* Processed the OG's form rejection of "They'll Fix Any Leak, Guaranteed!"
* Processed Apex's receipt acknowledgment for "The Miracle Material."
* Updated market list from updates sent in.
* Submitted "The Haunts of Hill Crossing" to Strange Horizons and processed receipt acknowledgment.
* Submitted "Demons of Disease" to Basement Stories.
* Submitted "They'll Fix Any Leak, Guaranteed!" to Strangetastic.
* Submitted "Gone Huntin'" to Flash Fiction Online and processed receipt acknowledgment.
* Much belatedly processed a crit of Vicesteed chs. 33-34.
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
03/05/10, Friday
Deleted from Vicesteed, ch. 27

Old chapter wordcount: 9,205
New chapter wordcount: 6,444
Vicesteed Draft 1 wordcount: 207,877
Vicesteed Draft 2 current wordcount: 144,187
Notes: Not looking forward to the next chapter, where there's a believability problem to fix. Sigh.
Reason for deleting scene: Too much thinking, or trying to fight, and not enough quick-run-hide. She's a smart girl, and she knows she can't win this fight.
Which deleted scene is it anyway?

[...]began to stand.

She shook herself out of her daze and scanned the garden for a weapon. Hand-to-hand, or foot-to-face, as it were, hadn't done her much good. From what she could see, they'd probably tidied up the garden in preparation for this little shindig, and the darkness didn't make things any easier. A shovel would have been perfect, ideally with a woodchipper that she could throw the body into afterwards, but she would have settled for a nice, stout branch.
[...]
She backed away and nearly tripped over an ornamental rock garden. She bent and grabbed a chunk of granite twice as large as her fist. It sparkled in the moonlight. She wound up and pitched the rock with all her augmented strength, aiming for his midsection. If she could get him down again, she'd make damned sure he wasn't getting back up.

A millisecond before impact, Luke twisted to the side and brushed the rock aside like a mosquito. Valinda
[...]
She didn't think she had a chance in this fight, and she doubted that her wisdom chip would be able to help. The only ideas she had that might take Luke out involved heavy machinery, and there was a distinct lack of that in the garden.
[...]
For all she knew, she'd be surrounded by the enemies who had arranged for her to be shipped off to the vicestable. She nearly turned to run in a different direction, but she knew that the ballroom was her only chance to shake Luke. She'd find a way to slip away once she was inside, a way to avoid Luke and the invited guests both.
[...]
So long as the order was to capture but not kill her, Luke's job was more difficult. He couldn't pull out a gun and shoot her. He brain her with a rock. He couldn't use any of the million ways there were to kill a person. She forced her legs to move faster, gulping deep breaths of air as she sprinted. She wished again for a pair of jeans and some running sneakers. Obviously, women here didn't do a whole lot of running for their lives. A streak of pain was spreading like infection up her side, a combination of a stitch in her side from running and the boning of the corset digging into her ribs. She dodged under a low-hanging branch, and the fur hat was knocked from her head. Good riddance. If only it was so easy to be rid of the spotted and fur-trimmed dress, but that would really nix any idea of her blending back in with the crowd. It was going to be difficult enough that her mask and hat were casualties of war in the garden.

She heard the measured sound of Luke's heavy footsteps coming up behind her. She forced a last burst of energy to pick up the pace. Her legs were as sore as if the costume she wore had been carved from stone, but she was nearly there.

Other writingy stuff:
* Posted freewriting, writing log.
abracanabra: (editing despair)
03/04/10, Thursday, no day job work, but overslept
* Posted freewriting, writing log, Nanowri.
* Began making editing changes to Vicesteed ch. 27.
* Worked on taxes. I'm counting this as a writing project because, well, my writing's a business and it's part of my taxes.
abracanabra: (editing despair)
03/03/10, Wednesday, full day at day job
* Processed Clarkesworld's form letter rejection of "The Haunts of Hill Crossing."
* Re-resubmitted "The Miracle Material" to Apex, using a different doc format in case that was what was getting it caught in their spam filters. I think--no joy. But my email with no attachment went through okay. So then I re-re-resubmitted it from another email, with attachment, and it went through okay. Am mighty confused.
* Know that "every scene should do at least two things" adage? Here are some of those things: http://writersdigest.com/article/showing-and-telling-excerpt
* On Writing Rules: http://ann-leckie.livejournal.com/144298.html

03/02/10, Tuesday

* Finished redmarking Vicesteed ch. 27.
* Posted writing log, freewriting
* Prepped Vicesteed ch. 28 for editing.
* Re-submitted "The Miracle Material" to Apex, after their very prompt "didn't get it" response to my query. AS of noon, have not received acknowledgment, and am a bit antsy.

Book Unread

Mar. 2nd, 2010 10:18 pm
abracanabra: (Default)
Here's the thing. I edit. I edit a lot. I know exactly what many of the problems to look for in my own writing. I fix them when I can see them--and I can't always, even if I know they're there.

But this means that I can't enjoy reading a published book written by somebody with many of the same problems as I have when the problems weren't fixed. 42 pages in, no farther, even if the storyline is moderately amusing.

Restating. That? Should have been fixed.

And bits that were written because that's what you were writing at the time, but it's really not part of the story. Those? Should have been deleted.
abracanabra: (editing iffy)
03/01/10, Monday
* Processed Extreme Creatures' personal "very much enjoyed, but not the right fit" rejection of "The Perfect Costume."
* Submitted one of my stories to the MinnSpec anthology. Go go gadget reprint!
* Posted writing log, freewriting
* Began redmarking Vicesteed ch. 27. Feeling despairing over whether I'll ever finish this damn book for realz.

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