Remediation Village
Jun. 7th, 2010 03:46 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
abracanabraThink I'm settling on "Remediation Village (Probationary), Inner Mongolia" as the title.
Still long. Still maybe too much punctuation. But it's got the hooks for remediation and Inner Mongolia, and I hope the (probationary) adds a little tension. I dunno. It's better than what I had before.
Still long. Still maybe too much punctuation. But it's got the hooks for remediation and Inner Mongolia, and I hope the (probationary) adds a little tension. I dunno. It's better than what I had before.